It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? use specific reason examples to develop your essay.
Today, many parents believe that metro cities provide better facilities and infrastructure for children's progress compare to the countryside. I also agree with this argument as it is apparent that big cities are becoming a growth center for all kind of people. I will discuss it in the following paragraphs.
First of all, metro cities offer a guarantee of fast, quality and sustainable growth along with lots of choices especially for younger. this is because cities have more developed schools which provide explicit education along with other curricular activities. Secondly, big cities have fully equipped the sports complex and the art theater that can be used by the children to develop their skills in art and sports activity and show their talent at big munch. Additionally, usually knowledge gathering science and history fair which boost the student's knowledge organize in metro cities only.
Besides, some parents argue that to live and grow up in the countryside brings some great economic advantages. usually, countryside schools charged less fee compare to the cities school. The main reason for this is the cost of living is less in the countryside. Moreover, competition between pupils is less compared to big schools in cities. countryside usually a small area so students need to minimum traveling. The last thing I said, the environment in the countryside is very energetic and pollution free which brings the tremendous positive energy and keep themselves healthy and fit during their academic.
In conclusion, although life in the countryside has some serious benefits, it is lacking in terms of serving modern education and essential attitude which must have in a new generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32841328413 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78195011996 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59778597786 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0677431898 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162839234174 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050483281042 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364693822368 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876207135453 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383530719048 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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