You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to the former teacher.Give detail of the jobexplain why it is important.Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Essay topics:

You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to the former teacher.

Give detail of the job
explain why it is important.
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter in connection with to attain a letter of reference from you to complete my job application successfully in XYZ inc organization. This opening is for Junior Embedded Software Engineer. I have already completed three round of interviews and final HR discussion is in progress.

As you know, I really interested in Embedded Electronics field since my college days. I always wish to have a job in the similar domain and I believe my search will end with this job opportunity. Additionally, this organization does not hire the candidate without reference letter for academic institutions.

The reference letter should contain basic information of the student such as educational background, the area of interest and behavior with seniors during the academic term. Moreover, I glad if you add some information about the soft skills and achievements in college days, For example, I won an international robotics competition in 2018. It will strong my job application.

I really appreciate if you provide the letter before next Monday which is the deadline for submission too.

Your Sincerely,
XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and final HR discussion is in progress. As you know, I really interested in Embe...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 15, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'letters'.
Suggestion: letters
...academic institutions. The reference letter should contain basic information of the...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, for example, such as, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32596685083 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14320458304 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640883977901 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9619690075 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6363636364 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17603809454 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634027015399 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367809288658 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108690189815 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00857060827224 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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