Most people accept that we now live in a globalization world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive and negative development?
Today, globalization is at its peak. Many people believe that it provides enormous advantages in terms of economic developments, whereas, other say that it has some serious negative impacts as well. I will discuss both in the following paragraphs.
Nowadays, the world is becoming smaller due to advance technologies and transportations. People can do limitless communications and trades among different countries. For example, people have the privilege to sell their products and
services to another country or vice versa. As a result, overall demand and consumption are increased which creates new business and employment in some non-developed or underdeveloping countries. Additionally, Internation communication through the Internet helps to understand the culture and traditions of various countries. Sometimes, Knowing the nitty-gritty of others culture can give clues of negotiation during critical trade-wars and other crisis.
On the other hand, globalisation has some serious drawbacks as well. Firstly, the risk of online threats has increased in the day to day life. people who shop online or transfer funds often cheated by hacking their credit cards or bank accounts by hackers. Eventually, they lost trust in online shopping and transactions. Apart from this, in many countries, globalization is a primary reason for unemployment. This is because of the outsourcing of the work to poorer and developing countries in order to make a big profit. Hence, Many skilful people do not have good jobs in foreign countries.
In conclusion, Although, globalization makes many people life prosperous in many countries, Its disadvantages may put many in the deplorable situation. I would say globalization needs some strict rules to avoid these issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64285714286 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27460873314 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8518901132 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140173192752 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405641405765 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378977587456 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0772035569499 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329347058154 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.84 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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