Human is a social animal. There are significant changes in children behavior once they start to grow. I believe that this changes have more negative impact on society compared to its positive side. I will discuss it in the following paragraph.
Firstly, Children have lost their innocent and become selfish after age of 18. This is because they put their task and needs on top priority without considering others needs which was not the case in their childhood. Today, mostly people help each other in order to seek some kind of rewards or financial help from them in future. So, this thinking has changed the mind of adults as well. Secondly, some children who are naughty and rebellious in their childhood, usually become calm and co-operative in the mature age. They are not only realize their responsibilities but also get wise understanding. For example one of my friend who was quarrel and uncooperative in school days, have became a very sincere and calm.
On the other hand, These changes have few positive and negative impact on society. First of all, lots of innocent create unnecessary nasty competition among each other. They use trick or manipulation with their friends to be on top and considering their task on priority. They believe that it is essential to survive and achieve the success in today's society. On the positive side, Adults who possess calm and co-operative attitude understand society better. They try to resolve important society issues such as poverty and illiterate.
In conclusion, children’s behavior change according to recent society’s thoughts. People who are already a dominant member should compel others to improve attitude in order to deliver better message to adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77671623707 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8612510035 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.3157894737 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7368421053 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15789473684 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196864685414 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604515735972 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062750222626 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128227097143 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503243235947 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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