the chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.
The chart compares the ratio of three main challenges face by three different age categories people, while visiting abroad.
Overall, people from 18-34 age group face more difficulties in making friends, while aged group find challenging to adopt native language.
To begin with, making new friend circle was more challenging for 18-34 age group, but over 55 age citizens can easily socialize with new environment and culture. The proportion was recorded 23% for aged group and this was increased by twice for 18-34 age group. Similarly, finding accommodation in abroad was problematic for 18-34 and 35-54 age group, with 40% and 39% respectively. However, over 55 age group found only 22% of challenging for searching house or apartment in overseas, which is nearly less by twice than other.
Moving to learning new language, adult have quick learning ability than older people, with 29% 18-34 age group found less challenging, whereas, over 55 age people were at more than half in this challenge. Similarly, slightly more than one third people from 35-54 age group, found difficulties in adopting native language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adopting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: adopting
...ends, while aged group find challenging to adopt native language. To begin with, maki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, third, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29608938547 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63676498222 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575418994413 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.567292569 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.23603664747 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0703295480646 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431038528781 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380772540084 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656969131615 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346389875553 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.