The bar chart illustrates the percentage of integration problems that people living in other
countries have.
Overall, the most considerable problem is sorting out healthcare for all the age groups.
This problem highly affects people aged 35-54 and it is the peak value of the whole graph
.However, overall the least significant problem is finding the school for children. This problem
does not have much impact on people over 55.
Sorting out finances is the substantial problem for people aged 18-34 and its ratio is
nearly one-third. The percentage of this problem nearly equals for both people aged 18-34 and
aged 35-54. On the other hand, people over 55 encounter with the economic problems at least
among all of the age groups.
People aged over 55 mostly suffer from healthcare (more than 35 percent). This value
almost same for people aged 35-54. The unimportant problem for people over 55 is finding
school problem, whereas this ratio six times as higher as in 35-54 aged participants. The problem
affecting all the ages groups in a negative way is sorting out medical services, its value nearly
same for all ages groups and its value varies from 33% to 37%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...it is the peak value of the whole graph .However, overall the least significant p...
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Line 6, column 2, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... is the peak value of the whole graph .However, overall the least significant problem ...
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Line 11, column 47, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'encounter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'encounters'.
Suggestion: encounters
...5-54. On the other hand, people over 55 encounter with the economic problems at least am...
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Line 12, column 7, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...h the economic problems at least among all of the age groups. People aged over 55 most...
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Line 16, column 56, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... whereas this ratio six times as higher as in 35-54 aged participants. The problem...
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Line 17, column 31, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a negative way" with adverb for "negative"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... problem affecting all the ages groups in a negative way is sorting out medical services, its va...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, third, whereas, at least, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10659898477 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40680877737 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6744787691 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11732507732 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703907287925 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549538900474 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570622377404 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049983631911 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.