The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the number of airport visitors in three major airport of New York between 1995 and 2000.

Overall, it can be seen that the number of passengers travelled via JF airport was fluctuated while LG and NW airport saw an upward trend during the six-year period. Another noticeable fact is that in the end of the period, LG was the most widely used airport.

Looking at the detail, the number of travelers used JF airport was well above 20 million in 1995 then swiftly increased until reached the vertex at just below 50 million in 1997. After that, JF airport experienced a drop in visitors during 1998 and 1999. In 2000, JF airport had a remarkable comeback with more than 40 million passengers.

Turning our attention to NW airport, it started at approximately 16 million travelers in 1995. The number the rocketed to more than 40 million in 1998 and maintained the same level till 2000. On the other hand, the number of LG airport passengers was steadily climbed and reached 50 million in 1999. One year after 1999, there was a boom in number of visitors which resulted in nearly 70 million visitors in 2000.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'airport' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'airports'.
Suggestion: airports
...mber of airport visitors in three major airport of New York between 1995 and 2000. O...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'then', 'well', 'while', 'on the other hand']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239631336406 0.268076937826 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.119815668203 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0460829493088 0.0759168565197 61% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0414746543779 0.0366838410393 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0138248847926 0.0131127313244 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.175115207373 0.155750635184 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0506912442396 0.0379272487307 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.45846279043 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00921658986175 0.0210936926555 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0967741935484 0.0948980150116 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00460829493088 0.00437022459523 105% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00460829493088 0.00967000014798 48% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1136.0 1161.00487805 98% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.9 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.70854271357 5.90752243213 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.331658291457 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27135678392 0.247514529752 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13567839196 0.171178102325 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.070351758794 0.112407865282 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45846279043 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 50.5969058011 49.3433353143 103% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.9 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1147940987 42.9750493124 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 47.035678392 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.65789473684 2.94281807926 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399623925359 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162408781924 0.181151798455 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0736716690886 0.0850326197045 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.659157395023 0.706616315825 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171009361213 0.157042692854 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20660460661 0.228904883108 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134537013033 0.108899403657 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.407606519979 0.367819155151 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100717804106 0.0812612215331 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323690207888 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956410551568 0.0921553760075 104% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.08536585366 49% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 3.02926829268 66% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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