The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the differences of an island after the installation of tourist infrastructure.
Overall, there were a significant number of facilities have been constructed in the island. However, the natural resources and landscape of the island is still well preserve.
Before the construction it is clearly that there were only trees, a beach and most parts of the island were empty. As is observe form the map, after the construction, many facilities have been built including a reception, a restaurant and many accommodations for tourists. In addition, a pier was also constructed and the beach is utilize for the swimming purpose. There are two types of track to connect these facilities. First type is the vehicle track which begin at the pier then go circle around the reception and end at restaurant. Besides that, there are various short footpaths which lead to each tourist's house as well as the beach.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'observed'.
Suggestion: observed
...t parts of the island were empty. As is observe form the map, after the construction, m...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'utilized'.
Suggestion: utilized
...r was also constructed and the beach is utilize for the swimming purpose. There are two...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'in addition', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272189349112 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.147928994083 0.116061578633 127% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0650887573964 0.0759168565197 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0532544378698 0.0366838410393 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00591715976331 0.0131127313244 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118343195266 0.155750635184 76% => OK
Participles: 0.0355029585799 0.0379272487307 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96201716848 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0118343195266 0.0210936926555 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.147928994083 0.0948980150116 156% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0118343195266 0.00967000014798 122% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 928.0 1161.00487805 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.10526315789 5.90752243213 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322368421053 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256578947368 0.247514529752 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190789473684 0.171178102325 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157894736842 0.112407865282 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96201716848 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.546246751206 113% => OK
Word variations: 54.9916435015 49.3433353143 111% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.8888888889 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.807454182 42.9750493124 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 135.714022679 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 0.689975730869 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 42.5467836257 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.05714285714 2.94281807926 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.477794024783 0.418131533498 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.110659752855 0.181151798455 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0571718334791 0.0850326197045 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.599611769457 0.706616315825 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195021415122 0.157042692854 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.236789856339 0.228904883108 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112285492296 0.108899403657 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395311038535 0.367819155151 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0349771736219 0.0812612215331 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386228065407 0.316326947829 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476392015413 0.0921553760075 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 3.02926829268 165% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.