The chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian male and female participating in day-to-day physical workouts in 2010.
Overall, the percentage of men carrying out the physical exercise is decreasing with the increase in the age group until forties and shows increasing trend thereafter, while the greater proportion of women are participating in the exercises with increasing age group.
Starting up with the male, the highest percentage of the male that is 52.8 are found doing regular physical activity in the age group 15 to 54. The proportion seems to decline with the increase in age groups reaching the lowest 39.5 percentage in the age group 35 to 44. Afterwards the gradual rise in the number of men participating in physical activity is noticed.
In contrast, the trend in number of females doing regular physical activity seems to rise gradually with increase in the age group and smiting at 53.3 percent in the age group 45 to 54 and with the lowest score of 47.1 in the most elderly age group, 65 and over. Almost similar share of male and female are found in age group 65 and over with 46.7 and 47.1 respectively whereas largest gap of about 13 percent between the two is found in 35 to 44 age group.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es doing regular physical activity seems to rise gradually with increase in the a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80660377358 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68797988256 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452830188679 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2244152189 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.571428571 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85714285714 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335494652989 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170948853958 0.103423049105 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400883432272 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210865694064 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519592633968 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.