The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years

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The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years

The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of films production from 5 different countries between 2007 and 2009.

Overall, the percentages of film produced by country B, D and E increased in 3 years while that number of C fluctuated and A decreased over the same period. A was the country produced the highest percentage of film compared to others.

In 2007, the proportion of movies from A was the highest which accounted for precisely 80%. The figure then slightly dropped to about 78% in 2008 and 75% in 2009. Meanwhile, the number of movies produced by C was pretty low of 20% in 2007 then went up to about 22% in 2008 and ended up with nearly 19% in 2009.

On the other hand, the proportion of film produced by B rose up significantly year by year from approximately 34% in 2007 to 35% in 2008 and finally to 50% in 2009. D and E film production trends were similar to B with about 13% and 4% in 2007. The figures then gradually went up to 14% and 5% in 2008 and reached the peaks of almost 15% and 6% in 2009, respectively.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38860103627 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69495807042 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518134715026 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1174442185 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1111111111 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264856558154 0.215688989381 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123801708669 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1235375481 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195102684266 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133374370446 0.0819641961636 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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