The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the owning and renting proportion of residence in two countries, where include England and Wales, from 1918 to 2011.
It can be clearly seen that significant reduction in rented households in comparison with owned one over the given period. Overall, the turned appeared in after 2001.
The chart started in 1918, there was the largest proportion of renting households at 78% while the owned residence was the lowest at 22%. after that, an increase and decrease indicated for owning and renting accommodation separately until 1971. The proportion of these two varieties was the same at 50% at the moment.
there was no turning point after 1971, The number of residential owner kept raising gradually to 68% since 1971, by contrast, the dropping of residential renter was entirely shown from 50% to 32% significantly. The situation was unchanged over three decades. Lastly, there was a slightly rebound by both trends, 65% and 35% for owned residence and rented residence independently at the end of 2011.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: After
... owned residence was the lowest at 22%. after that, an increase and decrease indicate...
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Suggestion: There
...ies was the same at 50% at the moment. there was no turning point after 1971, The nu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ence independently at the end of 2011.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17261904762 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77408413723 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.0764847108 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214836312684 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896868711003 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091022631581 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148133765861 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786368573711 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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