The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart illustrates the proportion of estate in owned and rented shelter in England and Wales in the years 1918 to 2011.

Overall, the percentage of rented accommodation was by far the highest as nearly fourfold as owner's figure at the beginning. However, there was an unpredicted replacement that the ratio of owned accommodation was by far the highest as two times as rented figure to the ending up.

When it comes to the downtrend, renting household experienced a significant drop from 80% in 1918 to 31% in 2001 before a slight rise to 37% in the next ten years.

When it comes to the uptrend, there was a gradual increase from 22% in the first year to 40% in 1961 of owning household's proportion before rose sharply to reach a peak at 69% in 2001. Consequently, it decreased slightly to 64% in the final year.

In comparison, there was a striking resemblance in the figure of two kinds of households which accounted for 50% in the middle of the period.

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...ed for 50% in the middle of the period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72093023256 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81592281656 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2429444224 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259967906525 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116878485418 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118880353903 0.0843802449381 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144995739379 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128558812431 0.0819641961636 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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