Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a popular increase in advertisements. In my opinion, i believe that this trend comprises both of beneficial progress and disadvantages.
First of all, it is evident that commercials play a vital role in the development of the economy. Every company needs to promote their products to consumers, thus advertising is a reasonable solution to maximize the profit of the business. In comparison, ads also contribute effectively to save customers' time. For instance, buyers could collect sufficient information on goods through commercials at home despite wasting time to go to shopping malls or markets.
On the other hand, advertisements generate a wide range of drawbacks. Firstly, customers experience the excess cost of the product rather than the origin because of competition regarding spending budget on advertising between economic corporations. As a result, buyers must pay higher prices for their expenses or receive lower quality of products which are promoted. Moreover, Interrupting of commercial breaks is by far the most irritating to audiences. After a hard-working day, people need to entertain by watching TV or funny programs but find it hard by the popularity of commercial breaks. Hence, the growth of commercials impacts negatively to buyers, but also to audiences.
In conclusion, based on all the above explanations, the increase in advertisements obtains both of positive development and shortages.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.533632287 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28316051311 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.681614349776 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2583294411 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9230769231 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1538461538 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0893070601489 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029601241127 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405597160886 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0590904995647 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527808049777 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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