The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011 Summarise the information by seecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by seecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the ratio of families in owned and rented accommodation in two different places England and Wales in the period of namely 93 years from 1918.

In general, the subjects listed in the chart had total fluctuation when this one climbed, the other one had to fall in 93 years. However, they still had one time that both of them witnessed the same percentage.

In the first 53 years, households in rented accommodation witnessed an overwhelming decrease from 78% down to 50%. Namely, it dropped 9% in 1939 and kept it steadily in 1953 whilst 8 years later, it falls dramatically with the difference of 9% and continued declining to 50%. Despite this decrease, households in owned accommodation had a significant improvement from 22% to 50% simultaneously with that in rented accommodation. In detail, there was a development of 9% in 1939, coincidentally, it was still steady in 1939 and had a sharp increase f 19% in the next 18 years.

Keeping on decreasing, the rate of households in rented accommodation fell at the bottom with the ratio of 31% in 2001 while in the next 10 years, the statistic of that saw an increase of 5%. Besides, the households in owned still kept on developing and reach the peak at nearly 70% in 2001 with the difference of 19% in 1971. In spite of that steep rise, there was a slight drop in 2011 at the ratio of 63%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, incidentally, still, while, in general, in spite of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67901234568 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94438620953 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514403292181 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3272486518 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.7 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137692475038 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567874756114 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541087239722 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899265867204 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540249076562 0.0819641961636 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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