The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling

The flow chart illustrates the process of waste paper which is reused. At first glance, it is evident that there are six main stages in this process, beginning with collection of waste paper and ending with production usable paper.

The first stage of the process is that waste paper is collected from the paper banks and business and then this paper is sorted by hand. The unsuitable paper is eliminated and the rest of the amount of paper is delivered to paper mill.

After delivering to paper mill, the paper is cleaned, pulped and other materials such as staples are taken out. The next stage of the process is that inks and glues are removed from the paper. At the final stage, the paper is produced by paper making machine to use.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... ending with production usable paper. The first stage of the process is that w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of paper is delivered to paper mill. After delivering to paper mill, the pape...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 620.0 965.302439024 64% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69696969697 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18532703959 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 191.7 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.482421399 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5714285714 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351858500264 0.215688989381 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202138245897 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832609488251 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272535752289 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550711890046 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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