Levels of young crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions
In the recent years, almost countries around the world have the higher rate of young crime. There are some reasons causing this situation and some solutions should be implemented to prevent it.
The rate of young crime has increased because of some reasons. Firstly, teenagers lack education from parents and schools. Many parents only want to earn much money and they believe that money will bring happiness for their children, so they become to ignore ones. They are so busy and have not enough time to share and talk to children, therefore the children might become worse. Beside parents, teachers are also important for children. They need to discern behaviour and attitude of children and give useful advice. Secondly, teenagers are impacted by games and social networks dramatically. They learn many things from Internet but they cannot distinguish between good and bad things. Therefore, they can be cheated and exploited to become a crime.
There are some solutions which can prevent this situation. Government should raise parents’awareness about educating their children. They need to spend more time to take care of and educate the children. Apart from parents, teachers also need to warn teenagers of harmfulness of social networks and teach them how use the Internet efficiently. Moreover, government should have policies to manage websites and social networks in a close way to protect children.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons leading to commit crime in young people. measures need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, apart from, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31048387097 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69369325475 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0575518314 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17965024674 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653736716278 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086712648663 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151031447559 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992306402315 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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