Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
It is true that happiness is very important in life and there are simple things that can make people happy but it is difficult to understand how to be happy.
People have different views about happiness, so it is not easy to define about happiness exactly. For example, a person will be happy if ha has a stable job to feed his family abd everyone in his family can enjoy a peaceful life together. Many people think that they will feel joyful when they have a lot of money or become one of millionaires in the world. They believe that money can bring them many things they want. Other people will be happy if they can dedicate their life to society, help the poor, children and disable people.
On the other hand, there are simple factors in attaining happiness. For example, a person can achieve happiness if he feel statisfied with everything he is having. He is provided some basic demandings such as food, clothes and a house. And he has some relatives who always take care of and support for him. Another example, people would be very glad if they can pursue and attain one’s goal in life. They will be proud of themselves and happy with their life.
In conclusion, people have their own meaning of happiness but there are only some reasons which make them happy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62445414847 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3200968293 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541484716157 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8376276481 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4615384615 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22923337968 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839154727583 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09162338755 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167478698559 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111889639809 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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