Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experience

It is a fact that happiness prevents neumerous negative consequences as it is considered a crucial one in human's life. This essay discusses happiness which is difficult to measure, followed by some prominent factors, which are essential to obtain happiness.

To begin with, it is true that happiness is an abstract term which means unable to see and touch. However, it is being illustrated based on person to person and the situational condition. Some people consider a happiness is having a hangout with a beloved one for doing adventurous activities, whereas others state happiness is playing various types of games and cooking delicious food. Hence, it is represented that happiness varies the attitudes of the persons.

On the other hand, there are several essential factors, which are responsible for posses happiness, such as health and wealth. Both these factors are highly important for everyone to achieve happiness; conversely, if anyone of these imbalanced, happiness is not possible to access. For instance, if someone suffers from a dangerous, deadly disease, they cannot be happy until his or her illness reduced. Furthermore, a healthy relationship with family and friends is also mandatory to achieve happy life. Always accompanying parents and friends in any consequences without prejudices might enjoy a happy life. Therefore, health, wealth, and a good relationship with family and friends aid to achieve happiness.

In conclusion, indeed, happiness cannot be measured because it is an abstract form, but it varies from person to person; whereas, it is achieved by better health and wealth of the person, along with a healthy relationship with beloved ones.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39015151515 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90962106517 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4822948623 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.461538462 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219719392219 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807700700227 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458714027064 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127928798483 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479939848588 0.056905535591 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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