I agree with this statement that parents are the best counselors to give good suggestions while we are struggling to make better decisions.
I have completed BSc nursing, after certified as a graduate meanwhile I was suffering from future decisions at the current movement my mother has come and told me that you have two options, firstly,if you go medical coding side based on your paramedical course then you may get little opportunities such as getting job on coding filed like a software engineer. Secondly, you have a wonderful life if you choose to work as a registered nurse in reputed hospitals, then after completion of one or two years of experience you may come to a home and enjoy with your job while having a family life and homely food. At the movement, I decided to choose my career as a staff nurse. Now I am happy with my joyful job.
One of my friends, his name is Jagadeesh, he too suffered to make a clarity in his mind at the movement he has gone to his father. He suggested to him that this is the golden step to take before decision and advised also better to do business in current market then automatically you gain your communication skills and increase your growth fastly, then finally he started his own business, it runs well and even though his bank balance also increases, what a fantastic decision. Now he believed that it was successful by his father idea.
In my opinion by comparison of my two ideas, then parents are the good advocates. So each child has to make a decision with his /her parents.
Thank you
Thank you
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...me that you have two options, firstly,if you go medical coding side based on your...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60727272727 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66126174015 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.519912461 49.4020404114 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.7 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173580870697 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607350190793 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05449309758 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980566878182 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426047300713 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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