In the past, lectures were used as a way of teaching large numbers of students, but now with the development of technology for education, many people think there is no justification for attending lectures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that lectures play a prominent role in education, as they were utilised overwhelmingly in the bygone days to deliver a speech to numerous audience; whereas, since advancements in technology everywhere in this current era, some communities are advising that no further formal lectures are needed. However, I oppose this statement because traditional tutorials respond according to candidates as well as digital technology no substitute for facial interaction.

To begin with, it is often said that traditional lectures might be required as it responds to people's specific needs in order to ensure adequately addressing the topic. A lecture or speech is worth or valuable when the audience understands sufficiently. ISRO, for instance, in India, organise formal conversations on new inventions to make sure pupils receive enough information while clarifying candidate' queries, regardless of utilising outstanding technology, which they possess. Hence, lectures are mandatory to deliver an understandable speech.

Moreover, digital technology is no substitute for face-to-face interaction. To elaborate, technology never feels human psychological emotions; however, it might provide excess data, which might not be worth because recipients' understanding capacity while noticing expression is necessary. Nevertheless, this phenomenon sufficiently is accomplished by human lectures only. So, throughout the globe, many academic Institutions are designed to project work or a speech in the classical method for students to easier understanding, irrespective of accessing digital technology. Therefore, the technology never replaces formal lectures.

In conclusion, to my mind, even though technology flourishes everywhere, lectures must be taken into consideration because it fulfils receivers' particular requirements, delivers an efficient speech, and understands facial expressions of the people.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ands facial expressions of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.21804511278 5.12529762239 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38244136754 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8889420105 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164271532057 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610631524614 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032388894213 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957076425532 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039431821675 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.8 12.4159519038 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.26 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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