The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The graph offers a breakdown of the survey findings revealing the sample’s opinion about buying or drinking coffee or tea in the last month in five towns in Australia.
Overall, the respondents from all cities but Adelaide went to a café to have a coffee or tea more often than they bought it fresh or instant. It is also noticeable that the residents of all listed towns preferred drinking fresh coffee the least. Besides, the largest percentage of citizens who preferred drinking coffee or tea out in a café was in Melbourne, while lovers of instant and fresh coffee mainly were in Hobart and Sydney.
Turning to details, we can see that by far the largest number of opinion poll participants (almost 63%) purchased drinks in cafes in Melbourne and Hobart, and Sydney. A slightly lower percentage can be observed in Sydney.
The number of the surveyed in Brisbane and Adelaide ranges from 55 to 50 percent, respectively.
As for instant or fresh coffee purchased, the former sort was mainly popular in Hobart (nearly 55%). Meanwhile, fresh one was the choice of Sydney's citizens, at about 44%. The least number of people bought fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide (35% each).

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57127789496 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562189054726 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6925622961 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212779215049 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825479409686 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727411149074 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116094910284 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901730477184 0.0819641961636 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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