The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today

Essay topics:

The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today.

The two maps present the Pebbleton city in its current state and the old one 20 years earlier.

Overall, the urban space has expanded to become considerably more entertaining, offering a wide range of outdoor activities. An increased number of residential buildings, so as the new walking routes helped Pebbleton to attract citizens.

Previously, town consisted of the four houses lining the northern side of the sea shore and a film studio with a playing field on the river bank. Moreover, a lighthouse alongside an old fort located in the northeast direction, served as a sightseeing destination. To get to the school, students had to use the Old Fort and the Coast roads, which were connected by the Roadbridge.

Presently, only the play area and the lighthouse remain unaltered. The current set-up includes tennis courts positioned between the Lighthouse lane and a newly built footpath, that extends to the southern half of the territory as a footbridge. Nevertheless, the most notable change is the filming site renovation, which together with the expanded housing complex almost doubles the number of flats available. Creating more space for kids, the fortress was removed in favor of a children’s playground area. In addition, while youngsters are socializing, their parents can now relax in a community center.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, nevertheless, so, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27830188679 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95770515061 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 106.607317073 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683962264151 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7525447445 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.727272727 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0761171398424 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273370978398 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715040046782 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712612734666 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103389326336 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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