The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The bar chart illustrates how many the percentage of residents bought fresh, bought instant, or went to a café in five Australian cities during last 4 weeks.
Looking from an overall perspective, it can be seen that citizens residing in Sydney, Melbourne and Hobart tended to go for a cup of coffee instead of buying coffee while residents in other cities prefer buying fresh coffee to other choices.
As for the group which had the vast majority of proportion, the proportion of going to a coffee shop in Sydney, Melbourne, and Hobart is around 61%, 64 and 63% respectively. The proportion of buying fresh coffee in Sydney and Melbourne is about 43% and 42% correspondingly, which are almost the same as buying instant coffee with 46% these cities while in Hobart city, buying instant coffee dominated buying fresh coffee.
With regard to the category which had a relatively even distribution, the percentage of buying instant coffee is quite similar to going a coffee shop with roughly 50% in Brisbane and Adelaide city while buying fresh coffee had an even distribution with 34%.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, while, as for, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97252747253 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72184403881 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543956043956 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.1747495439 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.0 112.824112599 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.4 22.9334400587 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222501302354 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124898431221 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549770363489 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159793813638 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257803064838 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.2 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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