The bar chart illustrates the consume of coffee and tea buying and the way people drink in five cities in Australia, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, Hobart.
Overall, city residents went to a cafe for coffee or tea in last four weeks shows almost the highest percentages in three types whereas the figure for fresh coffee buyers have a reverse pattern.
It is clear from the graph that the majority of people from Sydney and Melbourne prefer to come to a coffee shop to drink, with over 60% of them visiting to one in last 4 weeks. The second popular way of drinking is to buy instant coffee, which is around 45 to 50% for Sydney, Melbourne and Adelaide, and 53% and 54% in Brisbane and Hobart, respectively.
On the other hand, the least chosen for the Australians to drink tea and coffee is to buy a fresh one, in all mentioned cities. It was only picked by less than a two-fifth of the population in Brisbane and Adelaide, and just over 40% in three remaining cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
The bar chart illustrates the consume of coffee and tea buying and the way pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61581920904 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48139040656 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.6012646468 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 136.166666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195978953127 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992439320924 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737753957887 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126150429239 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592147962417 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.11 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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