the chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

Essay topics:

the chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

The bar chart illustrates the purchasing habits of coffee and tea by residents of the five cities of Australia. The report also elucidates the consumption of these beverage in the last twenty eight days.
Overall, during the past four weeks the percentage of residents who bought fresh coffee was quite less and maintained its position in all the cities. However, the purchase of coffee and ingestion of the beverages by the natives displays a small amount of fluctuation in its trend.
In an initial analysis, Melbourne displayed the highest percentage of residents visiting a cafe followed by Hobart which amounted up to 54% in the purchase of instant coffee. Sydney recorded the least and the most number residents who bought instant and fresh coffee respectively. While people of Brisbane performed poorly in buying fresh coffee resulting to almost 33% of the total residents, Adelaide demonstrated only 49% in the percentage of the locals visiting café.
Adelaide is the only city where its inhabitants preferred the purchase of instant coffee over visiting the cafe by 1%. The percentage difference between the local visiting café and purchasing instant and fresh coffee was maximum in Sydney and Hobart respectively.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this beverage' or 'these beverages'?
Suggestion: this beverage; these beverages
...port also elucidates the consumption of these beverage in the last twenty eight days. Overall...
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Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-eight
...nsumption of these beverage in the last twenty eight days. Overall, during the past four we...
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Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'number' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: number
...fee. Sydney recorded the least and the most number residents who bought instant and fresh ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1035.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2806122449 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78271779484 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540816326531 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0535181204 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154499397135 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732941842483 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912222253294 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103149458884 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614551110918 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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