The chart below shows the results of a survey about people s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart illustrates the percentage of Australian people in five cities who purchased and drunk coffee and tea in the last 4 weeks. Overall, the habit of going to a cafeteria for coffee or tea is the most popular in most cities apart from Adelaide.

In regards to a tendency of having coffee or tea cups at a café, it was the most preferable option for all dwellers in Melbourne, Sydney, Brisbane and Hobart. The highest percentage of this habit came from Melbourne, in which witnessed about 62%. This figure was approximately 10% higher than the first-ranked proportion of buying instant coffee, which situated in Hobart.

Furthermore, Australian inhabitants in Adelaide consumed instant coffee the most, with exactly a half of the total proportion. Moreover, both Brisbane and Hobart had their citizens buy instant coffee in similar proportion, at about 52%, which is higher than the percentage of consumption of fresh coffee in each city. Conversely, an approximately equal percentage of purchasing fresh and instant coffee was seen in Sydney, with 2% in difference.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...in most cities apart from Adelaide. In regards to a tendency of having coffee or tea cups...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20689655172 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92641059663 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4594009073 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244702966587 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110368660211 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874965439621 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178658901989 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09951558308 0.0819641961636 121% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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