The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 - 2002.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995 - 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph demonstrates the amount of time the British people spent on phone calls over an 8-year period from 1995 to 2002 among three different types of call.

Overall, it can be seen that the time spent on national and international-fixed line as well as mobiles both increased over the period, while that of local-fixed line went up then down.

To begin with, the majority of telephone calls in the UK were through local-fixed line, with the average number of more than 70 billion minutes annually. National and international-fixed line was the second most used type of call, accounted for over 40 billion minutes each year. Meanwhile, mobiles were the least popular call type but had the fastest growth among the three categories.

Furthermore, regarding changes in the call duration, there was a rise in the number of minutes spent on local-fixed line in the first 5 years, reaching a peak of about 90 billion minutes in the years 1998 and 1999. After that, it experienced a significant decline, down to only 70 billion minutes in 2002. On the other hand, the total time spent on national and international-fixed line and mobile calls increased sharply over the period. More specifically, the total number of domestic and international-fixed line rose from 38 billion in 1995 to around 58 billion minutes in 2002. In addition, the number of mobile calls also went up dramatically, reaching 35 billion minutes in 2002, much higher than the initial point (1 billion minutes)

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, then, well, while, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00809716599 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03261297636 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534412955466 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3796451407 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.7 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4 5.23603664747 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222051964961 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108320214158 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577718880993 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132398195786 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825945122228 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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