The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of money one nation can earn from the exportation of five different categories between 2015 and 2016. The table gives information about the percentage change in values from 2015 to 2016.
Overall, it is clear that export earning from petroleum products was higest in both years, while the money earn from textiles was lowest. However, textiles had the biggest change in value and agricultural products change with lowest percentage.
As can be seen, petroleum products bring the highest profits for country, just above 60 billions in 2015 and inceased by 3% in 2016. In contrast, textiles is category earn lowest money, about 27 billions in first year, but this figure had the higest change in the proportion in the next year. It increased by 15.24% to over 30 billions in 2016.
There was an in creased by 8.5% in the amount of value exportation from engineered goods. Agricultural showed the same trend but this figure is simliar in two years, at about 31%. Gems and jewellery showed an downward trend by 5.18%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 221, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the lowest'.
Suggestion: with the lowest
... value and agricultural products change with lowest percentage. As can be seen, petroleum ...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'earn the lowest'.
Suggestion: earn the lowest
...2016. In contrast, textiles is category earn lowest money, about 27 billions in first year,...
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Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...at about 31%. Gems and jewellery showed an downward trend by 5.18%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, well, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92134831461 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51931059879 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567415730337 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0964385658 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274818938384 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111870394386 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891536455862 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170453873177 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11917952707 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.