The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.
The above pie chart illustrates the future destination for anthropology students after graduating from one college. The following table gives information about the amount of payment they have gained after 5 years of work.
Overall, it is clear that the greatest proportion of graduates got full time job after their graduation for bachelor degree, while part time work with postgrad study have had the fewest demand. According to the table, in both freelance and government sector, most of the employees have been paid more than workers in private companies.
Due to the pie graph, 52% of the whole undergraduates have succeed in finding full-time job. On the other hand, the lowest records were allocated to whom got part-time work plus postgrad study simultaneously. Meanwhile, same amount of students with 8% ended up doing full-time postgrad study and not-known.
In figure two, 40 percent of employees in freelance consultant are paid more than 75 thousand pound. In government sector, people have witnessed more payments such as 50% who have obtained more than 100 thousand pounds. On the other hand, private companies’ workers seemed to have less amount of payment, for example, 35% have been given 50 to 74,999 thousand pounds. While, only 30% of them have received payments with 100 thousand and more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...he greatest proportion of graduates got full time job after their graduation for bachelor...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 132, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...r graduation for bachelor degree, while part time work with postgrad study have had the f...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 60, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...h, 52% of the whole undergraduates have succeed in finding full-time job. On the other ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21698113208 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6716441472 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1578227313 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.545454545 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114728031734 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507281566512 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757313330304 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992671011887 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107287828894 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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