The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years.
This pie chart illustrates the data collected from anthropology scholars regarding further opportunities after completing their bachelor’s degree. While the table demonstrates the anthropologist’s remunerations who have five years of work experience.
Overall, more than half of the students get full-time employment as compared to part-time employees, unemployed, and further study aspirants. Additionally, the experienced government servants are highest paid as opposed to freelance consultants and private workers.
With regards to the destination of anthropology graduates, 52% percent of students find full-time employment. 15% engaged themselves in part-time work; however, 12% were jobless after completing their term. 8% of students opted for full-time further studies, and only 5% choose odd jobs with a degree. However, the data of the other 15% were not available.
On the other hand, the salaries of graduates with 5 years of work experience is divided in four ranges. Government employees were the highest paid with 50% receiving more than $100,000 as opposed to 40% and 30% freelancers and private employees respectively. Freelancers are leading in the $75,000-99,999 window with 40%, and 30% in the public sector with 25% receiving the lowest in this range.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80423280423 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24659982179 2.65546596893 122% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5659989393 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130925065773 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528343752071 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657946364613 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0856774161112 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852854596642 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.06 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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