The graphs illustrate the employment of graduated Anthropology students from one university and the income of them over the course of 5 years.
Overall, looking at the graph, it is immediately obvious that the number of anthropologists has full-time job registers the highest figures. In addition, the proportion of those who have more than $100,00 salaries in freelance consultants and government sector is the largest percentage.
To start with, the percentage of anthropologists work full time plays a majority with 52%. Meanwhile, this amount of those who study postgrad full-time and have not known yet are significantly smaller (8%). The number of unemployed students is just over one-tenth (around 12%), which is lower than those who have part-time work (15%). Finally, the percentage of anthropology students who have part-time work as well as postgrad study accounts for an inconceivable about 5%.
In another perspective, those who work at private companies and have a $50,00 salary only have the highest percentage compared to other amounts of income. Meanwhile, this salary just plays a minority about 15% in the government sector and freelance consultants. In the government sector, the rate of anthropologists who have more than $100,000 income plays one second. This amount of salary in freelance consultants is just about 40 percent which is similar to those who have from $75,00 to $99,999 income.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 107, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...number of anthropologists has full-time job registers the highest figures. In addit...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... the percentage of anthropologists work full time plays a majority with 52%. Meanwhile, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, well, while, in addition, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29596412556 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02375853649 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520179372197 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.076184798 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.363636364 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 5.23603664747 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106728077648 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515386804485 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456355927583 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879566902202 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582035864333 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.