The chart illustrates changes in carbon emissions among several countries in 1975 1990 and 2005

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The chart illustrates changes in carbon emissions among several countries in 1975,1990, and 2005.

The chart illustrates changes in carbon emissions among several countries in 1975,1990, and 2005.
Overall, most of the countries show the growth pattern in carbon emission. However, Germany and United Kingdom tried to decrease their emission and by the end date they reached this goal.
As for details, USA’s carbon emission is the highest among all countries in all three dates and in 2005 comprised of 1600000 metric tones. The next country which generates significant amount of carbon is Chine and at the end it almost reached the level of USA, while in the beginning of the period carbon emission of the country did not cross 400000 line mark. Another country with the significant changes of carbon emission is India, whose numbers ranging from about 50000 to approximately 300000. The last country with the moderate changes of carbon emission is Canada and in three year it’s amount did not exceed 200000.
Nevertheless, not all countries showed the growth pattern in carbon emission. Germany and United Kingdom were almost on the same level of carbon emission in 1975 with the volume comprising approximately of 200000. In the following years they were able to reach the downgrade of carbon emission, which did not overstep 200000.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50085282355 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512315270936 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6232255123 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.471062872443 0.215688989381 218% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221528472906 0.103423049105 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.265170549929 0.0843802449381 314% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.39476145757 0.15604864568 253% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.357655506869 0.0819641961636 436% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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