The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007
The bar chart illustrates the number of people in Britain emigrated to five different countries from 2004 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that the most popular place moved was Australia.
It can be seen from the chart that the number of people who moved to Australia was the highest over a period of 4 years, reaching a peak at just over 50,000 people in 2006. The second most popular place, in Spain, was lower than in Australia. There was a slight decrease in the amount of the British moving to Spain between 2004 and 2007.
On the other hand, just over 20,000 people emigrating to New Zealand each year, while the USA fluctuated between 20-25,000 people over the period. Although the amount of the British in France was approximately 35,000 people in 2005, it was the least popular country, at just under 20,000 people 2007.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ost popular place moved was Australia. It can be seen from the chart that the n...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...moving to Spain between 2004 and 2007. On the other hand, just over 20,000 peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73287671233 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32789064892 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 283.868780488 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2899784406 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7142857143 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166530434948 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956324588144 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101478414799 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13131464183 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359709818843 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.