The chart shows British Emigration to selected destinations between 2004 and 2007.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart illustrates British travel between five different destinations ( Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, France) from 2004 to 2007.
Overall, Australia had the most number of British emigrants, while New Zealand and the USA has the least number of emigrants in the given years. Maximum number of passenngers visited Australia in 2006, on the contrary Frace had the minimum visitors in 2007.
Firstly, Australia had more than 40,000 thousand passengers all 4 years, with more than 52,000 emigrants in 2006. Followed by, Spain in the second place, passengers flow to this country had a gradual decline from 2005 - 2007 from 35,000 to less than 28,000 passengers. similar pattern was followed by New Zealand which had 22,000 visitors in 2004, and by 2007 it had only 20,000 visitors.
Additionaly, France had more than 33,000 emigrants in the year 2005, and progressively declined to less than 20,000 emigrants in 2007. In addition to this, between 2004 to 2007 passengers travelling to Australia, France and the USA had fluctuations . The USA had varied number of visitors in all 4 years, least being in the year 2005 with less than 20,000 emigrants.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...avel between five different destinations Australia, Spain, New Zealand, USA, Fran...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a in 2006, on the contrary Frace had the minimum visitors in 2007. Firstly, A...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Similar
... 35,000 to less than 28,000 passengers. similar pattern was followed by New Zealand whi...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...lia, France and the USA had fluctuations . The USA had varied number of visitors i...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...varied number of visitors in all 4 years, least being in the year 2005 with less than 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, while, in addition, on the contrary, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15263157895 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64648429492 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.3695225112 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1111111111 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823512265577 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478605007601 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404306410696 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710332121255 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041583607363 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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