The chart shows number of foreign students in Canada

Essay topics:

The chart shows number of foreign students in Canada

Given is a bar chart providing information on the number of international students from four different countries studying in Canada. Units are measured in thousands.
A glance at the provided graph reveals that while the number of Chinese students will see the most significant growth until 2020, the figure for the USA will level out.
Starting from somewhere in the vicinity of 25000 students in 2005, Chinese students number tripled before the year 2015. It is predicted that this number will reach a peak of around 80000 students in 2020. Likewise, increasing from nearly 5000 students in 2005 to approximately 40000 students in 2015, the number of Indian students saw an enormous growth. It is interesting to note that the figure for India will see another rise to about 60000 students until 2020.
The figure for the American students follows a quite distinct style. The number of students from the US was around 10 thousand in the first year, and it will remain at a stable level before 2020. However, for France, the number of students saw a moderate climb from approximately 10000 students in 2005 to nearly 15000 in 2015. This upward trend will continue to around 20000 students before 2020.

Votes
Average: 7.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, likewise, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96534653465 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52135764774 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524752475248 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5274400443 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3636363636 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296153281744 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129101265634 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779439233048 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196918197181 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650518883324 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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