The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 and the material status of adults Americans in two of the years

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and the material status of adults Americans in two of the years.

The graph chart represents the information provided in a statistics of 2008 regarding the fuel usage in the USA following 1980 to the upcoming year 2030.

The maximum consumption is found for petrol and oil energy as well as in coal. The need of petrol and oil is increasing at great extent. it will rise up to approximately 50 quadrillion units as it has been only 35 quadrillion units in 1980. Moreover, the coal energy has a gradual change in its dissipation. it was used over 15 quadrillion units upto 10 years. After 12 years, there was a sudden change found in year 2005 where it was reached upto 25 quadrillion units. However, with the increase in demand it will reach upto estimated 30 units by 2030.

there are other energy sources which are not quite popular in demand such as Nuclear, Solar/Wind, and Hydropower because they are very expensive. All of these powers consumption rate remained under 5 quadrillion units till 1990. By year passing, the hydropwer is decreasing its popularity and it expected as it will be less used in the next few years.

To summarize, the power and oils along with coal energy are increase in demand with the time. In addition, other fuels have less consumption because of which there is a less chance of their depletion.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, moreover, regarding, so, well, in addition, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76018099548 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68217035181 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2842548971 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9230769231 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0521257593894 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180186586994 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036519408022 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459151220379 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532943357165 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.2329268293 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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