Nowadays, many young adults find the consumption of energy drinks as a reliable way to recover from exhaustion and stress.
Is this a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that youth prefers to consume energy drinks in order to relax and rejuvenate the moods. There is a widespread worry that this leads to a myriad of concerns in one's life. However, the consumption of energy drinks has both pros and cons which will discuss in this essay.
There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that nowadays, there is a huge pressure of study and other activities puts on the shoulder of teenagers. In the cut-throat competition among peers, parents want their children to always stand first in the class or in any other extra curriculum activities. For instance, adults felt exhausted as they are quite busy fulfilling their parent's demands and expectations. Consequently, they want to boost their energy by taking energy drinks. These drinks works as a stress buster and activated their minds. Moreover, the benefits of energy drink stand one in good stead, as far as, augmenting their chances of excellence and prosperity is concerned.
There are, however, some pitfalls that overwhelm the potential benefits of energy drinks. The primary one stems from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, youngsters have not realized its gravity and gauged the magnitude of its repercussion when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle. To exemplify it, most of the teenagers got addicted and indulge in bad habits such as consuming various kinds of drugs, doing crimes to earn money for purchasing drugs, and hard drinks. As a result, they distracted from their studies. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the consumption of energy drinks at an early age.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that despite some drawbacks, the benefits of the energy drinks are indeed too great to ignore. Moreover, it is a reliable way to recover from exhaustion and stress, but parents must keep an eye on their children's activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03560830861 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74537647475 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5307308199 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8235294118 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176365468054 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055604221509 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452993110878 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109981011315 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285279623491 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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