The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie charts illustrate the estimated percentage of three different nutrients (sodium, added sugar and saturated fat) in breakfast, dinner, lunch and snacks in the USA.
Overall it can be seen that there is a significant difference amongst the charts.
According to the data, the vast majority of sodium is represented during dinner, while only 14% of it can be found in breakfast and snacks. Regarding saturated fat, 37% is consumed during dinner time and more than a quarter (26%) at lunch. Moving on to added sugar, snacks show the highest figure with 42% and breakfast the lowest with only 16%.
Comparing this information, it can be observed that sodium and saturated fat are consumed in higher percentages at dinner, whereas added sugar at snacks. Finally, the least amount of these three ingredients can be found in breakfast.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nutrients'' or 'nutrient's'?
Suggestion: nutrients'; nutrient's
...estimated percentage of three different nutrients sodium, added sugar and saturated fat i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 711.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11510791367 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67130352693 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1393726496 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0707163801136 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369172104419 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0223311413194 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0495626275764 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019350330546 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.