In order to find a good job, people should have a university degree.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modern world, it is often claimed by the vast majority of the population that a university degree is essential for a well paid and pleasurable job. Personally, I partially agree with this statement because high salary and enjoyment can be found in occupation with or without a university degree.
To begin, it is undeniable that higher educational knowledge can provide to employees like doctors and nurses good jobs after their graduation. To explain that, the extremely demanding training that they get, makes them shape their skills, hence, they learn efficiently and in a correct way every aspect of their job. In addition, the experience throughout the years and further competencies can guarantee a huge salary and of course the sense of fulfillment in their working lives. Thus, a university degree and all the process in order to get could lead them in good jobs.
On the other hand, there are numerous occupations that do not require a degree, although workers on them can have great salaries and enjoyment. Great examples are the radiographers in the hospitals as well as barista/bartenders. To explain that, without any qualification and only six months of training, the occupation of a radiographer can provide a huge wage to anyone. Furthermore, many famous bartenders earn a lot of money by making cocktails without any kind of academic knowledge. Thus, the absence of a university degree does not mean that can have only low incomes and/or unsatisfactory jobs.
To recapitulate, my perspective of this issue is that having a university degree can lead to highly profitable and euphoric jobs, however people without high standard qualifications can find them
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a correct way" with adverb for "correct"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ills, hence, they learn efficiently and in a correct way every aspect of their job. In addition,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, in addition, kind of, of course, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21978021978 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06435160758 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593406593407 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5356940624 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.75 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160809203547 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556456720622 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459974466187 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964694284553 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0159574492067 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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