Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's modern world, the increasing rate of people deciding not to eat meat or fish has become a hot topic of discussion. Vegans, as they have been named, claim that this way of life makes them healthier and can also have major advantages for the world. Personally, I believe that veganism is the answer to the 21st-century diseases, such as diabetes and obesity, however it does suit everyone.
There is no doubt that the benefits of avoiding meat are more than consuming it regularly. First of all, it is evident that red meat increases the heart rate of the human body three times more than any other food product. The proof of this is the fact that less than 2% of vegan had stroke in the USA in 2017, whereas 75% of meat-eaters in the same year. In addition, necessary proteins that meat has can be found in legumes, like lentils and sometimes even in bigger proportions than in meat.
Moreover, the choice of veganism benefits the environment and can prevent the extinction of several species. Unfortunately, the human desire to taste the meat of almost every living creature has lead to a significant decrease in the numbers of many animals. Individual studies have shown that 15.000kg of crocodile meat is eaten in Australia every year, while the birth rate of them is declining rapidly. Thus, veganism can stop the loss the biodiversity on Earth nowadays.
To conclude, from my perspective, severe medical conditions can be eliminated by adopting this way of eating. Of course, it is completely personal decision to follow it, otherwise, we would have been in a non-democratic country and I doubt that it will ever be a universal choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, in addition, no doubt, of course, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87323943662 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72026812263 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8601152768 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145081591537 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475723494437 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395297149391 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815189053989 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616161530413 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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