Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today's modern world, technology has a dominant role in society. Thus, it is argued whether or not the development of it has made mankind more or less sociable that it was a few decades ago. This essay will discuss both views and will also state why I strongly believe that through technological inventions, humans became more social than they were.
To begin, the way that technology changed how people used to communicate is very obvious. With relatively cheap smartphones and the internet, the difficulties of communication have overpassed. Being an active social member nowadays with so many free social platforms is something unique. For example, when the internet came into our lives, sites like Facebook and, afterward, Twitter, gave to all of us the ability to express ourselves, find new friends and also a nono-paid way to talk to each other. Thus, technology and the internet are the main reasons for the change in the way that was communicating and that now many people are popular.
On the other hand, a part of the population claims that technology has damaged the pure connection amongst people. Most of the teenagers are spending their free time playing video games instead of doing sports. They are trapped in virtual reality. That is how technology is making us less sociable. With numerous ways to prevents the population and especially the youngers of having friends.
To conclude, technology has altered in many ways of our lives. Regarding the issue of how it actually changed our social life, the views differ. Although, each person should have the ability to judge the way that technology affects his life and his personality.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ant role in society. Thus, it is argued whether or not the development of it has made mankind ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y affects his life and his personality.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, regarding, so, thus, for example, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05818181818 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67785531553 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603636363636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2978648988 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9375 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167205864522 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550583689227 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728660483166 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093804537167 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387070442502 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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