Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.

Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, single-sex education has become a hot topic of discussion. Some people believe that separating male and female pupils would be more beneficial for their educational progress, while others that mixed schools will benefit them in terms of their social skills. In this essay both sides of the argument will be addressed before a conclusion is reached.

On one hand, allocating boys and girls in different schools can undeniably improve their grades in certain subjects. What I mean by this is that the brain morphology of each gender differs in small age; as a result boys are able to process information related to positive sciences extremely faster than girls. Thus, if a class had only male pupils, their educational progress would definitely be quicker than in a mixed class. This theory has been proved by the ‘’Exeter project’’ in which 4 schools exchanged pupils for a semester and in the end of it both group witnessed major improvements since tutors could have a different rhythm for each gender. Consequently, separating children could benefit their performance in school.

On the other hand, the co-educational system nowadays provides children with better social skills for their adult life. To elaborate, a mixed-sex environment is more representative of the real life, in which men and women share the same occupations. Thus, from the sensitive age of adolescents children are able to accept the differences between males and females which would result to healthy interpersonal relationships among mankind. Furthermore, it might resolve several social issues, such as discrimination and intimidation.

To sum up, the debate whether co-educational or single-sex education could benefit teenagers in a better way has not been answered for decades. However, it is my firm belief that detrimental consequences will occur in humanity if the option of single-sex education would be approved. Unfortunately, the level of homosexuality will rise whereas the child-birthrate would fall dramatically.

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, i mean, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52063492063 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25836172621 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1960809841 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15423189135 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485431409614 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396525749566 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904489058257 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02958537433 0.056905535591 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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