The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features make comparisons where relevant.

These pie charts illustrate information about the number of most consumed nutrients in USA people 's typical meals. Overall, it is clear that Sodium and Saturated Fat are regularly added in Dinner, while Added Sugar is mostly found in Snacks.

Both Sodium and Saturated Fat are usually found in Dinner, at 43% and 37%, respectively. Following Dinner, both nutrients are then contained in American's Lunch, at the amount of 29% and 26%, respectively. Furthermore, Sodium has tied percentages for Breakfast and Snacks, both are at 14%, while Saturated Fat is contained in America people's Snacks, at 21% and 16% in American's Breakfast.

Meanwhile, Americans usually use Added Sugar in their Snacks, at 42%. After Snacks, Added Sugar is found in Dinner, with a half amount of Snacks, at 23%. Following Snacks, Added Sugar is contained in Lunch, at 19%. The least Added Sugar is consumed in Americans' Breakfast, at 16%.

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Average: 7 (3 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12666666667 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72787259396 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5749695155 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4444444444 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0213388476759 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113064814666 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261109457207 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0213590088172 0.15604864568 14% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230628093366 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

flaws:
don't repeat words, like: 'respectively', 'following'...

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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 149 200
No. of Characters: 726 1000
No. of Different Words: 74 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.494 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.872 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.71 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 53 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 34 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 29 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.718 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.478 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.204 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4