These two maps illustrate the layout of University Sports Centre, where the first map illustrates the current layout, and the second map describes the way it will look after redevelopment.
At first glance, it is clear, that the capacity of University Sports Centre will be expanded. As a consequence, the Outdoor Courts, which located in the east and west side of the building, will be demolished.
Furthermore, various new facilities will be constructed. First, in the west side of building, Leisure Pool will be built together with the additional Changing Room and Sports Shop. Specifically, the additional Changing Room will be connected to the Leisure Pool and located in the southwestern of building, where Sports Shop will be placed next to changing room, in the left side of the entrance.
The next is in the east side of building, where 2 Dance Studios, Sports Hall, other additional Changing Room and Cafe will be constructed. In detail, 2 Dance Studios will be constructed side-by-side, where other additional Changing Room and Cafe will be placed in the southeastern side of building. There will also be enlargement of the Gym Area, twice of its current size.
In summary, the redeveloped University Sports Centre will offer various new facilities and improve the old ones.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, look, second, so, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92419727536 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 320.4 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9314393557 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167317696976 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851809570369 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521309881585 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119613164274 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043368983637 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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