The charts below show the changes in ownerships of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line chart illustrates the proportion of households in a particular country that owned three main types of gadgets, namely washing machine, refrigerator and vacuum cleaner while the second line graph indicates how many hours of housework were recorded on a weekly basis, within a period from 1920 to 2019.
Overall, the ownerships of the 3 appliances had a tendency to be upward while the amount of time spent on housework showed an opposite trend. It is also worth pointing out that at the end of the period, all families in this country were reported to own both refrigerator and vacuum cleaner.
To begin with, in 1920, starting at the highest position, the percentage of households that owned a washing machine was about 40%. This number then experienced a noticeable rise of approximately 30% before flattening out at the end, despite a slight fall in 1980. However, although only 30% of families had a refrigerator at the beginning, this figure increased remarkably and reached the peaked after 8 decades. Surprisingly, in spite of the fact that there were nearly no households possessing a vacuum cleaner, this group’s indicator then witnessed a soar and peaked at 100% after just 7 decades, surpassing the other two counterparts.
Turing to the second line chart, the given country experienced a significant shift in terms of the time spent on household chores in each family, as the number of hours doing housework underwent a steep decline of roughly 40 hours after nearly a century.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...hing machine was about 40%. This number then experienced a noticeable rise of approx...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, then, while, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 250.0 196.424390244 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85864583326 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.1007632444 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.125 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178521365557 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751431299889 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714672127259 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119473912492 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554120294093 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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