The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
The pie charts illustrate the amount of water used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic plans in different areas of the world. It should be noted that the rate of water used in these fields is varied among regions.
First of all, the percentage of industrial use of water shows that in Europe with 53% has the highest industrial usage of water. Also, North America with 48% is the second area with a high rate of water used. Furthermore, the lowest amount of water used for industrial goals belongs to Central Asia with only 5%.
Second, the amount of water used for agricultural tasks is significant in all areas. In fact, agricultural usage of water has the highest place among purposes in different regions except in Europe and North America. Asia with 88% and Africa with 84% have the most rate of water usage among other areas.
Third, the charts show that the domestic use of water in South America is more significant than other areas with the usage rate of 19%. Moreover, Central and South East Asia have the lowest percentage of water used in the domestic field with only 7%.
In general, the amount of water used for industrial, agricultural, and domestic goals is various in different areas of the world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, third, in fact, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85849056604 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46316762142 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429245283019 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4001621991 43.030603864 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 5.23603664747 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378788564054 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17263709966 0.103423049105 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959043700804 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251954872095 0.15604864568 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620923969788 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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