The given pie charts reflect information about quality of water consumed by six areas of world for various purposes. The data is calibrated in the form of pie chat. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall, it is evident that; there are mainly three reasons due to which water is utilized in different places of the nation such as: for industrial area, agricultural as well as for domestic area. it can be seen that in Europe maximum water is consumed for industrial area that is 53% while, minimum usage of water for same purpose is about 5% only in central Asia. In addition to it, for agricultural purpose massive amount of water is utilized by central Asia 88% and lowest amount is in Europe 32%. At last, for domestic area in South America about 19% total water is used but on other hand, least amount of water 7% is used in central Asia and south east Asia respectively.
It can be seen that large proportion of water is used for agricultural purpose as compare to other which is clearly shown in pie chart that 88% of water is used in central Asia but low amount of water is used in this area for domestic as well as for industrial area. In addition to this, in case of south east Asia and Africa where huge amount of water is utilized for agricultural purpose 81%, 84% respectively.
As far as trend was concerned, other remaining three areas named north America, South America and Europe where maximum consumption of water takes place for agricultural as well as industrial area. In North America quality of water is forty eight percentum and 39% for industrial and agricultural land respectively. Moreover, in South America and Europe, maximum consumption of water takes place for agricultural purpose 78% in South America while, 53% in Europe for industrial usage. Beside it, for domestic area thirteen percent, 19% and 15% water is used by north America, south America and Europe respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
...9% total water is used but on other hand, least amount of water 7% is used in central A...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: forty-eight
...a. In North America quality of water is forty eight percentum and 39% for industrial and ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 7.0 314% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 965.302439024 165% => OK
No of words: 331.0 196.424390244 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81268882175 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65285355873 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 106.607317073 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.398791540785 0.547539520022 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 283.868780488 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5063593367 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261642565208 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11622397786 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726524743319 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190050393738 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407285686335 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.