The charts indicate to five places on the earth. Talking about water and the ways of using it.
It seen obvious all of pie charts have the got lowest percentage in the domestic uses like at home. However, the largest percentage went with the agriculture and farms. The center of Asia has the greatest numbers of percentage of agricultural use. on the other hand in Europe they did not use, water so much as central Asia or Africa. They just use 32,4%. But in the industrial they use it alot and the largest percentage with them. If we check on Africa, it seen they almost the second after Asia use water in industrial and opposite of Europe.
In north America and Europe they slightly same in industrial use and just less percentage to Europe, South Asia and South America are uses the water in Agriculturat rather that industrial.
Overall, they all use water much in the farm and agricultural. Europe and North America they use water more than others in the industrial areas. Africa got the lowest percentage in domestic and industrial uses.
- Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.Discuss both views and give your own opp 61
- Parents of obese children should be punished for making their children fat Do you agree or disagree 93
- A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets a lot of exercise and avoids stress. What do people do to stay healthy in your country? 84
- The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the lowest'.
Suggestion: got the lowest
...seen obvious all of pie charts have the got lowest percentage in the domestic uses like at...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...bers of percentage of agricultural use. on the other hand in Europe they did not u...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75409836066 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46865143341 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8655701666 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.9230769231 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0769230769 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158417208956 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718773303748 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189139462797 0.0843802449381 22% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110423078952 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176883010034 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.3012195122 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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