The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of water used for three main purposes such as Industrial, Agricultural and Domestic use in six regions of the earth.

It is clear from the charts that the percentage for Agricultural use is by far highest during the research period.

Central Asia and Africa are the areas which use highly water for agriculture with about 88% and 84% respectively, whereas this figure for Europe is lowest nearly a third. In North America and Europe water mainly used for industry which can be seen 48% for the former and 53% for the latter, followed by South East Asia (12%) and South America (10%), while there are only 7% for africa and 5% for Central Asia for water consumption.

19% of the total usage in South America is in domestic use, which meant that water used far more than the other areas, followed by Europe (15%) and North America (13%). The minimum consumption of water can be seen in Central Asia and South East, which both only accounts for 7% of total water usage.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, third, whereas, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66853932584 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3279925471 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533707865169 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.08664498 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.5 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317806533644 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178058955851 0.103423049105 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672323532952 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21391210666 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588432093086 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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