The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by a car.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the reasons of why people using a bicycle or a car when travelling to work.
Overall, health and fitness and less population are the main reason of individuals for using a bicycle to work. While, comfort is the most reason of people using a car going to work.
Firstly, health and fitness and less population are the highest percentage of people why they used a bicycle it is accounted for 30%. While, some people says that there is no parking problems which is 15%. The least reasons for using a bicycle is no costs and faster with the percentage of 13% and 12%.
In contrast, people most reason why they are using the car travelling to work is comfort which 40%. While the others reason is the distance to work for like 21%. Another reasons are faster than cycling and need to carry things to work with the same percentage of 14% each. Also the least reason is safer than cycling with exact percentage of 11%, respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ndividuals for using a bicycle to work. While, comfort is the most reason of people u...
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... a car going to work. Firstly, health and fitness and less population are the ...
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...used a bicycle it is accounted for 30%. While, some people says that there is no park...
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Suggestion: Also,
...k with the same percentage of 14% each. Also the least reason is safer than cycling ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70175438596 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37472988354 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461988304094 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1329127193 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.4 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263941678846 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131184624955 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962387832735 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21417285923 0.15604864568 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902655412108 0.0819641961636 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.